Transform Your Story From Good to Unforgettable
Great books aren’t written—they’re crafted. That’s where story-level editing comes in. Whether you need detailed guidance, a comprehensive evaluation, or a focused critique, I’ll help you refine your manuscript so it’s ready to captivate readers.
What Is Story-Level Editing?
Story-level editing (also called developmental or structural editing) focuses on the big picture—your plot, characters, and overall flow—and works best after you’ve completed your manuscript and initial revisions, incorporating feedback from trusted peers (aka alpha readers).
The Secret to Crafting Stories Readers Can’t Put Down
Every reader wants to fall in love with a story, but even the most compelling ideas can fall flat without the proper execution. That’s where story-level editing makes all the difference. It’s not about fixing grammar or polishing sentences—it’s about ensuring your story works.
- Engage Your Readers from Start to Finish
Story-level editing helps you identify plot holes, pacing issues, and character inconsistencies that might lose your reader’s attention or leave them unsatisfied. - Bring Your Vision to Life
You have a story worth telling, but translating that vision onto the page can be a challenge. A skilled editor ensures your themes, character arcs, and plot twists resonate with readers the way you intended. - Stand Out in a Crowded Market
In a world of endless choices, readers demand stories that captivate them. A polished, cohesive manuscript is your best chance at making your book unputdownable and unforgettable.
Story-level editing isn’t a luxury; it’s a critical step to elevate your book and maximize its potential. Whether you dream of self-publishing or landing a traditional book deal, this process ensures your manuscript is ready.
Story-Level Editing Services
Developmental Edit
Receive in-depth feedback on both the big picture and finer details of your story, from overall structure to individual scenes.
This service is perfect for writers seeking the most comprehensive guidance to transform their manuscript into a binge-worthy, unforgettable story.
Manuscript Evaluation
Get expert feedback on your story’s structure, pacing, and character development.
This option is perfect for budget-conscious writers seeking actionable insights into how to strengthen their story’s foundation and craft a more engaging narrative.
Manuscript Critique
Get clear, high-level feedback on how your story will resonate with readers.
This option is ideal for writers on a budget who need expert insights into what’s working, what’s not, and where to focus their revisions to make the biggest impact.
Check Out the Results Our Clients are Already Getting:
The comprehensive depth of the edit blew me away.
Analysis of everything down to the scene level was thorough and exhaustive and provided clear, concrete steps I can take to keep building the story.
With the feedback Jennifer provided, I now have a story that I feel ready to publish.
My beta readers would agree and are already fans of my work. Before investing in a developmental edit, I struggled with knowing what needed improvement in my story. This was beyond anything I expected. Amazing feedback.
Our Service Rates at a Glance
No Surprises. Just Results.
Manuscript Evaluation
Starts At Just...- 1 Round of Edits
- Main Plot Evaluation
- Subplot(s) Evaluation
- Character Development Evaluation
- Pacing (Story-Level)
- Pacing (Scene-Level)
- Scene Structure Evaluation
- Detailed Feedback
- In-Line Comments
- Editorial Summary
Developmental Edit
Starts At Just...- 2 Rounds of Edits
- Main Plot Evaluation
- Subplot(s) Evaluation
- Character Development Evaluation
- Pacing (Story-Level)
- Pacing (Scene-Level)
- Scene Structure Evaluation
- Detailed Feedback
- In-Line Comments
- Editorial Summary
Manuscript Critique
Starts At Just...- 1 Read Through
- High-Level Overview of What Works and What Doesn’t in the Story’s Plot, Character Development, and Pacing
- Editorial Letter
- Subplot Evaluation
- Pacing (Scene-Level)
- Scene Structure Edit
- In-Line Comments
- Detailed Feedback
Developmental Edit
Starts At Just...- 2 Rounds of Edits
- Main Plot Evaluation
- Subplot(s) Evaluation
- Character Development Evaluation
- Pacing (Story-Level)
- Pacing (Scene-Level)
- Scene Structure Evaluation
- Detailed Feedback
- In-Line Comments
- Editorial Summary
Manuscript Evaluation
Starts At Just...- 1 Round of Edits
- Main Plot Evaluation
- Subplot(s) Evaluation
- Character Development Evaluation
- Pacing (Story-Level)
- Pacing (Scene-Level)
- Scene Structure Evaluation
- Detailed Feedback
- In-Line Comments
- Editorial Summary
Manuscript Critique
Starts At Just...- 1 Read Through
- High-Level Overview of What Works and What Doesn’t in the Story’s Plot, Character Development, and Pacing
- Editorial Letter
- Subplot Evaluation
- Pacing (Scene-Level)
- Scene Structure Edit
- In-Line Comments
- Detailed Feedback
Not Sure Which Service is Right for You?
Schedule a FREE, no-obligation consultation. We’ll review your manuscript, goals, and budget to see which option might be the best fit for you.
Meet Your Editor
Hey, there! 👋
I’m Jennifer.
My love for reading and writing began in high school, so choosing to study English in university was an easy decision. While there, I focused on literature and creative writing, receiving critiques and participating in workshops. My writing improved, but I still felt no closer to figuring out how to write a truly compelling novel.
After graduating, I decided to dig deeper on my own. I studied the fantasy genre to uncover what made popular books so successful. I read craft books to learn what seasoned authors thought contributed to their success. That’s when I discovered the piece missing from my education: storytelling.
Great books aren’t just beautifully written—they tell compelling, well-structured stories. This realization completely changed the way I approach writing. Instead of focusing solely on language and sentence structure, I began exploring how stories are built, how tension and conflict work, and how to create narratives readers can’t put down.