We Help Fantasy & Romance Writers Craft Stories that Captivate Readers
Discover what’s holding your manuscript back and get a clear, actionable plan to fix it.
GREAT STORIES DON'T JUST HAPPEN.
THEY ARE METICULOUSLY CRAFTED.
The truth is that if you want to craft a story readers love, it takes more than stringing together events that happen to a central character.
A lot more.
We’re here to help.
Craft a Story You Love and Readers Devour
Because you don’t have to sacrifice your vision to write a story readers will love. 🙌
You’ve poured your time, heart, and soul into your story. After countless hours of writing and rewriting, you’ve finally finished your draft—a huge accomplishment! Excited (and maybe a little nervous), you’ve begun sharing it with family, friends, peers, and even beta readers.
The feedback starts rolling in. Some people love your characters, others suggest major changes. Some praise your worldbuilding, while others say it’s confusing. One reader says your opening is gripping, but another insists it’s too slow.
Now you’re faced with a frustrating dilema: who do you listen to?
Which suggestions will actually make your story stronger? And how do you know what to fix without losing the heart of what you love?
In as little as 48-hours, you can know exactly what needs to be changed in order to improve your story.
Let Us Help You Craft A Story That…
Hooks Your Readers
You only get one chance to make a great first impression. We’ll help you optimize your opening scene so readers are invested from the very first page.
Practically Sells Itself
Word of mouth is the best marketing you’ll ever get. Craft a story readers love, and they’ll be eager to share it with friends, family—even strangers.
You Are Proud Of
Stop second-guessing your story. Gain the confidence that comes from knowing you’ve done your best to craft your story.
Results Our Past Clients Are Already Getting:
Our clients’ success speaks volumes.
“With the feedback Jennifer provided, I now have a story that I feel ready to publish.
My beta readers would agree and are already fans of my work. Before investing in a developmental edit, I struggled with knowing what needed improvement in my story. This was beyond anything I expected. Amazing feedback.”
“The comprehensive depth of the edit blew me away.”
“Analysis of everything down to the scene level was thorough and exhaustive and provided clear, concrete steps I can take to keep building the story.”
Get Expert Help
Maximize Your Story’s Impact and Boost Your ROI with Expert Guidence.
Ditch the Guesswork & Endless Revisions
Get clarity on your manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses, so you can stop second-guessing and start making progress toward your publishing goals.
With a Story Breakthrough, you’ll get a complete a high-level review your story’s plot and character arcs to uncover what’s holding your story back.
With clear, personalized insights, you’ll know exactly where to focus your revisions so you can craft a story that hooks readers and keeps them turning pages.
Book Your Story Breakthrough Today! 👇
Story Breakthrough FAQs
How is it different from a Manuscript Evaluation or a Developmental Edit?
During a Story Breakthrough, we’ll review your story’s first scene, key middle scene, climax scene, outline, and blurb/summary and provide high-level feedback on potential plot and character issues. This is a great place to start if you’re not sure whether your manuscript needs additional help.
A manuscript evaluation, while still a high-level review, involves the editor reading the full manuscript and providing feedback in an editorial letter.
A developmental edit also focuses on the big picture, but goes more in-depth (reviewing things like theme, setting, etc.) and includes in-line comments within the manuscript in addition to an editorial letter.
What if I don't have a blurb or an outline?
We’ll ask you to create one before the Story Breakthrough. These documents help us get a feel for your story.
They don’t have to be perfect! But they should give us an idea of what’s going on inside your manuscript.
How much is the investment?
The Story Breakthrough is only $47!
After you receive the diagnostic, if you want more help and identifying specific areas of your story that could be strengthened, you may have an opportunity to work with us more closely via one of our coaching packages.
But there is no obligation to book a coaching package, and there is no big pitch. 🙂
Can anyone get a Story Breakthrough?
Any writer with a fiction manuscript can purchase a Story Breakthrough.
Just keep in mind, that we can only complete so many each month, so there is a limited number offered on a first-come, first-served basis.
WONDERING WHAT TO DO NOW THAT YOU’VE FINISHED YOUR FIRST DRAFT?
Discover the exact steps to producing a polished book that hooks readers from beginning to end. Inside the FREE Editing Roadmap, you’ll find a step-by-step process that helps you save time and money on editing your book.
